Monday, September 3, 2007
Comments and Revisions
Great job on all of your posts! Make sure to check your comments and revise the things I have pointed out. You won't get the points for your post until you've done so. When you revise each post, rename your title "revised muse #2" or something so that I know that you've done it.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
1 comment:
Ummmm...Mrs.Avink I'm still lost. I looked over this paragraph and still don't see a problem with it. I don't have your email so i don't know how to send u a message nor do i know how to add you or my friends to my page like you do.Please read this message soon!
"what I do like about it is the numerous events that goes on downtown like the Taste of Chicago, the band fest, the jazz fest, and etc." (this one has 2 of the same type of error)
Hint: Subject/verb agreement
Post a Comment